Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives.
What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?
In this modern world, there are many obstacles to many people making a balance between work and other parts of their lives. I am of the view that there are many rationales behind this situation and my belief is that it could be tackled by some viable solutions.
To begin with, this can be attributed to some compelling reasons. One of the foremost justifications partially leading to this problem is people’s strong will to get promotion. In fact, of late, many employers have favorred employees who are enthusiastic about their work over who do not. Thus, this is commonly regarded as an incentive for them to continue their tasks in order to have more competitive advantages over other co-workers. In addition to this, hectic work time is considered to be one factor resulting in the imbalance between work and daily life. In other words, in light of future achievements in profits, managers would compel their workers to work overtime. For this reason, people who have intense schedules cannot spend more time with their family, and hence forming this disorder.
To curb with this problem, governments should impose some restrictions in time for work so that inhabitants will have more opportunities to relax and maintain they should have some legal punishments for the individual who do not follow the rules. Furthermore, a large sum ought to be allotted to modern technologies and robots so as to modernize workplaces, and thereby creating positive work environment.
In conclusion, there are many valid reasons causing this problematic trend, and it seems to me that some pliable solutions should be initiated to remedy this given issue.
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| 2021-05-24 | tritritri | 73 | view |
| 2019-02-03 | Har preet singh | 82 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11808118081 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78292396341 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9473049061 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439712330352 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16415559654 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832559145778 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255510138671 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106796292372 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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