In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?
Given that today's world is booming, the number of shops and malls has increased significantly, even in small towns. That's why, many people think that small shops remain just a sign of the city, not for purchasing things. Nevertheless, my opinion is that stores do not lose their place in society.
First of all, the online shopping is considered uncomfortable way of buying things. The main reason for that your order is delivered wrongly in size, color or even address in most cases. It should be cited also that you have to wait your commissions longer than deadline.
However, in malls you have an opportunity to try on clothes or shoes which you want to buy. In addition, you can get free consultation from sales assistants if you were alone. It is also worth mentioning malls are great place to have fun with friends. For example, you have a chance to use of restaurants, cinemas and bowling alleys services. As competition intensifies between malls, they are searching for creating new facilities and expanding possibilities. Namely, some malls have seasonal small concert halls which cheer up people at any part of the year.
I am sure that malls will blossom as always. They will always be the center of commerce as the choice of the majority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...sed significantly, even in small towns. Thats why, many people think that small shops...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...tation from sales assistants if you were alone. It is also worth mentioning malls...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... I am sure that malls will blossom as always. They will always be the center of comm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, in addition, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86511627907 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66168454734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3436581935 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.7142857143 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304257053346 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851528957736 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347419274697 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160605023266 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223289926367 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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