Pollution is causes a big problem for our environment. every one concern presence of pollution. Whether pollution is less in past than it to day. This can be weighed in many aspects. although there are a lot of sources of pollution in the past years especially, people before 20 years ago were not educated enough to overcome pollution problems. In my opinion pollution in the environment is more than 20 years ago. In the following paragraghe Iwill elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, important thing come to my mind is, increase in rate of population in recent years is paramount factor in increasing of pollution. this is mainly due to the fact that, increase of people cause increasing in cars and other transportation. as we all now how these vechiles participate in air pollution. This is due to carbon dioxide emission from these car. this gas very harmful to human being. this is a compelling example from my real live. before 20 years ago we have lived in small town. Only my husband had car, I worked near by my home, therefore I do not need to have one. As contrast, right now we became a big family, we have four cars. Hence you can imagine negativily effect of increasing of population to our atomspher.Second, the other reason which may cause elevation in the level of pollution in our air is increase of factories in cities, theses industries release alot of material to the air as a byproduct. some of these product evaporate and mixed with air and ruin it. For instance, medical research show drasticaly increase of lung cancer in last few years. This case study indecatesthat pollution of air is essential reason for increasing of this disease. This illustrates the elevation of pollution in recent years.
Pollution is causes a big problem for our environement. every one concern presence of pollution. Whether pollution is less in past than it to day. This can be weighed in many aspects. although there are alot of sourses of pollution in the past years especialy, people before 20 years ago were not educated enough to overcome pollution problems. In my opinion pollution in the environment is more than 20 years ago. In the following paragragh Iwill elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, important thing come to my mind is, increase in rate of population in recent years is paramount facter in increasing of pollution. this is mainly due to the fact that, increase of people cause increasing in cars and other transportation. as we all now how these vechels participate in air polution. This is due to carbone dioxid emission from these car. this gas very harmful to human being. this is a compelling example from my real live. before 20 years ago we have lived in small town.Only my husband had car, I worked near by my home, therefore I do not need to have one. As contrast, right now we became a big family, we have four cars. Hence you can imagine negativily effect of increasing of population to our atomosphere
Second, the other reason which may cause elevation in the level of pollution in our air is increase of factories in cities, theses industries release alot of material to the air as a byproduct. some of these product evaporate and mixed with air and ruin it. For instance, medical research show drasticaly increase of lung cancer in last few years. This case study indecatesthat pollution of air is essential reason for increasing of this disease. This illustrates the elevation of pollution in recent years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79207920792 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76361604756 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.3812025413 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368301738454 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123804385971 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138198791143 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27866328138 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229420288803 0.0645574589148 355% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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