As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibility. To what extent do agree or disagree?
In a competitive world, businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people to talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the view that businesses should do more social activities than simply making money.
On the one hand, it seems clear that businesses have the right to maximize their profit to survive in an intensely competitive market. It is no doubt that the priority of any company is to cover its running cost, such as employees’ wage, payments for buildings and facilities. Besides, businesses also must invest in developed machines or innovations if they want to keep their success. Moreover, if the companies are not in good financial health, it hard for them to have social responsibility. Indeed, not only do the bosses find hard to stabilize their companies, but companies also can not to meet the changing needs of customers.
On the other hand, companies should not run with the sole aim of maximizing profit; they also play a crucial role in society. Firstly, it is necessary for owners and managers to well treat to their employees, rather than exploiting them. For instance, workers should be paid a reasonable wage to have the qualified life/ have the quality of life. Secondly, I also like the idea that business could use a proportion of their profits to support environmental projects, local charities and healthcare system. Finally, businesses don’t not try to minimize tax payments by using accounting loopholes; they should be happy to contribute to society via paying governmental taxes.
In conclusion, business have the right to make money, but I also believe that they always have a wider role to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: CONTRACTED_FORM_NOT[1]
Message: You used a negation after a negated contracted verb. Did you mean simply 'don’t'?
Suggestion: don’t
... healthcare system. Finally, businesses don’t not try to minimize tax payments by using a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07719298246 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84161572565 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.332752418 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287128770811 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101848534549 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859847697526 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207915512688 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895593707184 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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