Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have different views about how authorities should lead their countries. While the military is essential, I firmly agree that the economy contributes the most to their countries.
On the one hand, Pouring government funding into business is a wise decision that improved domestic living standards and international relationships. Firstly, a high level of the economy results in standard road infrastructure and public services that are only available if the government's financial condition is ample. In terms of basic human needs, high revenues countries can support citizens' education fees and treatment expenditure. The vaccine session in March 2021, for example, is abundant in developed countries such as American and London, while only a marginal quantity was transported to India. Secondly, a strong economy can imply diplomatic relations between countries, affecting the trading market and political influence. For instance, influential organizations ranging from health care such as WHO to global cooperation like United Nations was placed in American, the leading country in terms of economy.
On the other hand, an aspect that needs to be prioritized apart from the economy to stand on the global stage is the military. As many leaders are unable to bear the burden of domestic poverty or crises due to, for example, terrorism, the military is necessary. Take Iran, for instance; they are one the most impoverished because they are struggling with the constant dispute for the oil field with Americans.
Consequently, Japan became one the most liveable countries with a low crime rate and a famous educational system since it started to pay for USA forces to concentrate on developing the nation.
In conclusion, Although the military is vital for sustainable development, I still believe that economy is a crucial marker for countries' success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, still, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46712802768 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97198599557 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640138408304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6715758012 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124410264447 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420974554481 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225917149408 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708641899971 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144442027206 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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