Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
shopping online become more and more familiar with people in the modern life. while some people believe this trend is benefit to some extent, there are more significant drawbacks.
On the one hand, buying things via the internet have some benefits. Firstly, people find it easy to buy whatever they want by only using smart phone. Nowadays, many applications such as shopee, lazada , tiki.. which are created to service people on shopping online. Therefore, instate of spending several hours on shopping mall, people can stay at home and using shopping applications to buy things which they are finding. Moreover, if people buy things through the internet, thay can buy with benefit prices. For example, last week, my friend bought a new T-shirt in one shop with 500000 vnd, while I paid only 300000 VND with discount from shopee.
On the other hand, shopping online has detrimental effects on people’s life. First of all, online customers find it no safe about their information that filled in applications where they buy things. For example, an user have to change her number many times because strange shops called her to introduce their produces, although she has never contacted with them before. Additionally, people who buy things through the internet can not know the quality of produce before they buy. As a result, some buyer felt disappointed about the things that they bought.
In conclusion, although using internet for shopping is a good idea, online buyers have to protect their own information and make sure about the things that they buy to have the best experience
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08778625954 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43699244574 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0038480579 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20785414031 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800746233131 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583178169325 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13908714457 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480071757096 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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