In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
In today's world, people are getting more independent ant and active lifestyle as well as the aspiration for their own asset. As a result, the majority of people wish to possess their own private house rather than a renting one. From my point of view, there are a myriad of rationals for this trend and the benefits seem to outweigh the drawbacks.
There are obvious reasons why people prefer having their own house to renting one. The first thing to notice is that possessing a real asset can reassure their financial backup. The owners will not have to worry about the monthly payment if they rent a home as well as the contract deal with the host. A house can also be used as a mortgage in case the owner is in emergency situation requiring huge amount of money. Another thing is that it is deemed to be successful if someone can purchase their own horse. People in this day age are living in an independant world with big ego and that ingrained mindset. They would love to appear successfully and proudly in front of their friends, family and the like with a house belonging to them.
However, there are, to some extent, several negative aspects of this trend.One thing worth considering is that most people cannot pay the money in one turn, so buying on credit will be the solution. If that person cannot pay back the debt and interest on time, their financial condition will soon go to a spiral downward. At that time, the real stress curtails all the efforts. Moreover, people will have to pay bigger tax as they are proven to be financially capable. The governments will notice them with their real estate, thus change them more money to the state budget.
In conclusion, although there are undeniable disadvantages of not renting a house, I am convinced that there are justifiable reasons for buying a house, including the financial assurance, satisfaction of a person with big ego and not having to pay monthly payment, which is even bigger than the price of owning a house collectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Suggestion: One
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, another thing, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69800569801 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51279467139 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2524234214 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183184064951 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587552481266 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587123859674 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10686153007 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339039388592 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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