Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
The relation between industrialisation and prosperity of a nation is debatable. It is believed by some that industrial development has positive impact on reducing poverty while other argue that it harmful for environment and should be stopped. In my opinion, Industrial growth is an essential factor for economic development but more measures should be considered for environmental sustainability.
On the one hand, it often claimed by some that industrial growth has significant impact on lowering the poverty rate in certain country. This is because the increasing number of factories tends to open more job opportunities for both unskilled and skilled workers. This condition is most likely decrease unemployment and large number of people would gain fixed income. As a result, the purchasing power of the people would increase and this becomes a predominant solution to solve poverty issues.
On the other hand, other suggest that industrialisation should not be allowed as it brings negative effects for environment. Factories produce large sums of greenhouse gases which contaminates the air quality and contribute to global warming. If carbon dioxide could not be controlled, it would worsen the air quality and became detrimental for our live. For instance, the air quality index of industrial city is much lower than the areas that have more greenbelt spaces. Therefore, industrialisation leads to more disadvantages for environment and humans.
In my opinion, industrial growth should be supported as the main solution to reduce poverty is by creating more and more employments for people. However, this development should be in line with measures that protect the earth. For example, government should impose green taxes and strict law on how companies should manage their waste.
In conclusion, industrial growth is obviously beneficial to solve poverty issues but might be dangerous for the environment. Therefore, government should take an important role in imposing regulation to companies to protect the planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56591639871 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13661598199 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9743350111 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296693398823 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934989274138 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862772667595 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176210856538 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570500996717 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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