Many Students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
Many students live away from the home for their school, college or even for the job. While living far away from home we need someone who is always there for us like a family, in my opinion the roommate is the person who gives a vibe like a family. In my point of view, a good roommate needs these three qualities 1. Caring Person 2. Compatible 3. Loyal. I feel this way for some specific reason which are as follows.
First of all, why a good roommate needs to be a caring person because if the person is careless about itself and towards other then it will create a problem. I want to explain this with my own example, when I was pursuing my degree I had my senior as a roommate, in starting days of college she seems a good and helpful but one day I fall sick and I was not able get out of my bed, and cook for myself. I asked her to make a soup but she ignores me and left the room. At that time, she behaves very rudly with me. So, I think being a caring person is very important as a roommate
Second thing is that being a compatible is important quality because it is not important that every student in college or school is belongs from same culture. Sometimes two different people meets from two different continent. It is important to understand the each other culture and support them. For instance, food choices, culture and tradition. Some people really misbehaved with the person who does not belongs from their culture and treat badly. And it may make you feel alone when you already live away from your family and affects on your mental health.
The third quality is loyalty, and reason is you shared a all of things with your roommate. Like all your personal stuff. Here it is very important that a person need to a loyal with you. Does not touch your personal things in your absences for example, this is real incidence happened with me when I was in college. We are three girls in one room. In few days I started to notice that someone stealing money from my pocket. One day it become a worst when someone steal three thousand rupees from my pocket. And then I found that she was roommate, I trusted her but she broke my trust. At that time, I realized how important is this to having a good loyal roommate.
In conclusion, I feel that this is three important qualities of a good roommate.
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- Many Students have to live with roommates while going to school or university What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important 70
- Many Students have to live with roommates while going to school or university What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important 70
- Summerized the points made in lecture 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, third, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3441108545 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26754323358 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468822170901 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4382352623 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.24 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.32 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234651029574 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624908548076 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720252819425 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147469253134 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412988909485 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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