Now a days technologies is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing ( For example , through cellphone tracking and security cameras) In many cases, people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent days, people’s behaviors are being observed without their knowledge by many means like surveillance cameras and mobile phones, the offspring of recent technologies. There are many merits and demerits in that, the same will be discussed by the impending essay.
There are multiple benefits in doing monitoring citizens. Firstly, many deadly crimes involving human lives and thefts are successfully investigated and identified by overhearing the mobiles and analyzing the videos recorded by security cameras. In recent times, these are the boons for the police departments and for Forensic too since they are mainly dependent on the same. For instance, the home ministry of the Indian government recently declared that nearly 40 percent of crimes are being solved by surveillance videos. Secondly, not just used in the investigation, it is widely used to avoid such incidents too since many of the bank robberies and thefts are identified, much earlier than its action day in the respective departments. For example, the report of the International criminal police organization in the last month, clearly shows that 65 percent of financial crimes are being tracked and informed to respective country authorities and many of them were avoided before happening. Another report says the crime rate been dramatically declined once the cameras are installed in public places.
There are few drawbacks in the state of art technologies too. Firstly, there is a prolific increase in online bank fraudulent cases nowadays either by tracking the cellphone conversation or by hacking by criminals. For instance, nearly 70 percent of swindlings are happening mainly through the internet in recent days. Secondly, monitoring an individual’s activities is a breach of basic rights. Recently most of the intellectuals in the country and the human rights commission jointly condemn these activities.
To conclude, technologies have a great deal of both pros and cons in their own way. A far as my concern, if the disadvantages are handled by the respective technologists and authorities jointly definitely the advantages outweigh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50759878419 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03956230964 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1138845399 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248882264109 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658347155434 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408085958097 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119899360246 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511109877717 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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