The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems, and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming.
To what extent do you agree?
It is often argued that the government should lessen the expenses of domestic environmental issues and donate to pressing and dangerous matters like global warming. I completely disagree with this idea that investing money in solving local environmental issues fewer than other major environmental problems.
In my opinion, all local environmental problems are caused by natural destruction like soil degradation .The increasing amount of detrimental human deeds such as deforestation, farming in their habitat may lead to soil erosion and it causes result in cultivating hardly in this ground. Consequently, different aspects of the agriculture industry and the survival of people are influential For instance, the citizen will easily confront floods and storms which are the type of natural catastrophes due to small-scale forests in their countries.
In addition, besides the rise of natural disasters, most of the countries are also accelerating global warming through dumping ground and transportation. The mass fume has been dumped by industries, factories, and conveyances which contaminate the air and the water. The numerous carbon dioxide will be created by heavy fume in the atmosphere. These pollution not only rises global warming but also deteriorate the amount of wildlife. Even if it creates an omnipresent pandemic threat. Namely, the Covid -19, which well- known to be spread by bats, however, the main factor is humans who put the environment full of contaminations.
In conclusion, in my point of view, local environmental issues such as greenhouse gas emission and others are the most crucial which lead to the most pressing problem of nature. Thus, the governments should remain budget solutions of these problems instead ignore them.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-04-18 | fmichela | 89 | view |
| 2021-07-07 | haihapham2k | 61 | view |
| 2021-06-29 | PhuongAnh16 | 42 | view |
| 2020-06-25 | oyondev007 | 92 | view |
| 2020-06-23 | katenokk84 | 73 | view |
- The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming To what extent do you agree 42
- Nowadays technology is influencing modern art in areas such as design painting and film Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 79
- Studying abroad is thought by many students to be the best way to get a good education On the other hand some students believe that studying in another country has any drawbacks Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 67
- The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n other major environmental problems. In my opinion, all local environmental p...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mall-scale forests in their countries. In addition, besides the rise of natural...
^^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pollution' or 'These pollutions'?
Suggestion: This pollution; These pollutions
...reated by heavy fume in the atmosphere. These pollution not only rises global warming but also ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lso deteriorate the amount of wildlife. Even if it creates an omnipresent pandemic thre...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e environment full of contaminations. In conclusion, in my point of view, loca...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53505535055 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05163151376 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8631691142 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216218214322 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679139760771 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613011525083 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128508703873 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059749644378 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.