You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your bank services about treating your customer's request.
I requested a new cheque book past two weeks by calling at your customer care number. One of your customer representatives informed me on the call that I will be receiving my new cheque book in five working days.
After almost ten working days, I did not hear from your bank, thus, I called again at the customer care number. They informed me that they do not have any request submitted for a new cheque book. If you need any proof of record, I have my phone call conversation of last two weeks with your worker who is a representative at your bank. I want you to please expedite my request completion as I have to pay bills through cheque to people who are working for me.
Please update me on the exact time to wait to have my cheque book at my address as mentioned in my bank account details. And, I want you to take immediate action on this matter, so, this case gets close as early as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54901960784 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56460169483 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1318428142 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290253107673 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117273948147 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455566391957 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165182233421 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390802656849 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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