You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• thank him for the invitation
• mention why you can not attend the birthday party
• offer to meet him some other day
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Shikha,
Hope that all is well at your end.Thank you for an invite on your daughter's 8th birthday.I wish Sonia a very happy birthday in advance.She was around 5 years old when I saw her last during my visit to Bhopal.I am writing this letter to tell you that I can't accept the invitation due to some reasons.Though,I really wanted to join her birthday party.Because of unavoidable circumstances, can't travel now.
My father had a fracture in his leg last week so his treatment is going on.It requires visiting a clinic on a regular basis,consulting physiotherapist,medicines and other check ups.My mother is good in health thankfully but because of her age and some minor health related issues,she can't help my father completely.I have my office meetings and project deadlines regularly in this entire month so have to work on that also.
I apologise for not attending Sonia's birthday this time.I make sure that once my father gets recovered, will definitely meet for sure.
Hope you will understand. Take care.
Best wishes,
Sneha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Shikha, Hope that all is well at your end.Thank ...
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Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thank
...ha, Hope that all is well at your end.Thank you for an invite on your daughters 8th...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: AN_INVITE[1]
Message: Use only in informal register. In other registers, 'invitation' should be used.
Suggestion: invitation
...ll is well at your end.Thank you for an invite on your daughters 8th birthday.I wish S...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...n invite on your daughters 8th birthday.I wish Sonia a very happy birthday in adv...
^
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
... Sonia a very happy birthday in advance.She was around 5 years old when I saw her l...
^^^
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... saw her last during my visit to Bhopal.I am writing this letter to tell you that...
^
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... writing this letter to tell you that I cant accept the invitation due to some reaso...
^^^^
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
...cept the invitation due to some reasons.Though,I really wanted to join her birthday pa...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cept the invitation due to some reasons.Though,I really wanted to join her birthday pa...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...he invitation due to some reasons.Though,I really wanted to join her birthday part...
^^
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...eally wanted to join her birthday party.Because of unavoidable circumstances, cant trav...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y.Because of unavoidable circumstances, cant travel now. My father had a fracture ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... last week so his treatment is going on.It requires visiting a clinic on a regular...
^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consulting
...res visiting a clinic on a regular basis,consulting physiotherapist,medicines and other che...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , medicines
...regular basis,consulting physiotherapist,medicines and other check ups.My mother is good i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...therapist,medicines and other check ups.My mother is good in health thankfully but...
^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , she
...age and some minor health related issues,she cant help my father completely.I have m...
^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nd some minor health related issues,she cant help my father completely.I have my off...
^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...nd some minor health related issues,she cant help my father completely.I have my off...
^^^^
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...sues,she cant help my father completely.I have my office meetings and project dea...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...is entire month so have to work on that also. I apologise for not attending Sonias...
^^^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...not attending Sonias birthday this time.I make sure that once my father gets reco...
^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...not attending Sonias birthday this time.I make sure that once my father gets reco...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll understand. Take care. Best wishes, Sneha
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04624277457 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26285090024 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71676300578 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.701103729 44.8134815571 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.6 76.5299724578 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.6 16.8248392259 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 2.54639175258 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226553787017 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858560129795 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102154810545 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123963918885 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103811913555 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 8.37731958763 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 70.7449484536 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 7.45979381443 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 8.62886597938 336% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 8.15463917526 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.