Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages.
It is true that peers exert more influence on the young people as they tend to spend more time with them. I think this inclination of people has both positive and negative impact on the individuals, however I believe it’s benefits are eclipsed by its drawbacks.
There are various advantages to people spending time with the people of their age. The main benefit is that it helps them to prosper in their career. I mean when people try to emulate their friends who are successful, it motivates them to do their best and help them to excel. For example, when students compete with their peers who are exceptional at academics, it helps them to improve their academic credentials. In the same way, they can learn few important life skills such as communication, interpersonal and leadership skills by encouraging each other or by sharing , exchanging their knowledge and views which helps them in dealing with difficult situations in their future. So, this way friends’ company can have a positive impact on the individuals.
However, there are downsides to this habit of people. The gravest problem is sometimes this habit can lead to unwanted desires. Due to the high earning capability some young people tend to spend more money on lavish commodities such as designer wears, state-of the art gadgets and so on. This can entice people with low-income to purchase these products which may eventually make them run into debt. Apparently, another drawback is that young people can resort to malpractices if they spend time with people who has bad habits. For instance, if any of their group member indulge into smoking, then young people might get enticed and try to follow them which could be detrimental to their health.
In conclusion, although this practice seems to have an adverse effect on individuals in certain situations, the encouragement and motivation stem from these habits appears to be more useful as it help individuals to grow and develop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...job with extreme package working people the it will push the person to try and work to...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...g people the it will push the person to try and work to improve their careers and try r...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ers and try raise in corporate ladder. if they get inspired by their successful p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91362126246 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5957795214 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1956149712 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226112916876 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804289029829 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04728668223 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124764481157 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504452800165 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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