Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, there has been a heated argument regarding whether a school’s curriculum should include financial education as a compulsory subject. In my opinion, I totally agree with this viewpoint for following reasons.
To commence with, it is necessary for students to gain basic knowledge about finance from an early age to avoid stress related to financial issues. It is due to the fact that financial lessons include teaching students about the importance of an emergency fund for unexpected situations in their life. As a result, they may build a positive habit of saving money for emergency cases such as having medical problems or coping with expenses incurred. Moreover, learning about finance helps reduce the risks of becoming a victim of fraud. A basic level of financial understanding may help prevent students from being taken in by tactics which sometimes results in themselves spending years paying off heavy debts.
In addition, being armed with financial knowledge and skills contributes to a healthier life for students in the future. To be specific, financial lessons help boost students’ independence and responsibility. If students have a budget that they actively manage, it forces them to look at their spending to know how much they have available and thus, making better financial decisions. Furthermore, being well-versed in finance enables students to rationally step further towards investments into securities market or real estates to make profit.
To conclude, financial education is undeniably beneficial for students in terms of minimizing daily financial pressure and bringing more potential future for young adults. Therefore, I strongly believe that this subject should be added to the schools’ curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52044609665 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89418514949 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646840148699 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1532570225 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187697924637 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750471758815 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532818684438 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138006637777 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561591951116 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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