Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reason for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?
Medical professional insist that an elderly people should do more exercise on a regular basis.Meanwhile,senior citizens don't have active life and they don't exercise sufficiently.There are several reasons behind this.We will discuss them in this essay and points to encourage them to take exercise.
The main reason is many elderly are not habituated to the exercise since their young age.They believe that doing routine work includes all form of exercise which is not true.For example,an elderly woman/man who spend most of their time in kitchen for cooking thinks it is enough.Cooking involves standing and bending for most of the time.Though this can have more of negative outcomes than positive ones.Also,it is significantly difficult to start the exercise on an immediate basis.In additionn,aged person may be depressed and does not find a purpose in life after certain age.As a result,they do not try to do exercise or change their lifestyle pattern.
This is because physical exercise need energy,dedication and wish to improve.
This is possible either from within or someone who can motivate them.Someone who make them believe in themselves that they can be healthy at an older age also.Another way is the creation of social clubs for older people where they can meet on regular basis. They can attend different programs together like stretching,laughing or yoga.Visiting these kind of clubs,older people will learn more accurate and systematic way of doing exercises and communicate with each other which can motivate each other.
In a conclusion,will say that lack of exercise in older people is a complex issue.This has to be dealt with care and utmost patience.I believe proper care,patience and make them understand about exercise benefits will definitely give good results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27292542175 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.550325168 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 252.0 106.682146367 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.6666666667 20.7667163134 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384515154254 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181780834319 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565979334907 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200176682156 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05163201899 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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