Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Ohers say that this punishment is unacceptable in contemporary world. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The question regarding the human rights and freedoms has always been high on political agenda.
Many people support capital punishment for murder and molestation while other individuals think that execution is impossible to employ in modern world. Although saving in paying taxes for the maintenance of prisoners could be huge, I think that human being are prone to the error judgment and this can be total to innocent people
On the one hand, citizens are not content that they takes are allocated to assist criminals who are in prison.
This is because, this funds could be spent on the improvement of education and healthcare.
Therefore, death penalty a great instrument to save people’s money.
For example, Russian Economic Research Institute wrote in an article that 450$ spent on one jailed on mostly content.
In other words, this is a serious waste of government that could be redirected to the correct needs.
On the other hand, human make mistakes. This is because serious decisions of their destiny won’t stop other criminals.
Therefore, if the court passes the death sentence, it will bring relief to relatives and friends of the victim but no more.
For example, when serial killer Chikatilo was caught and shot in Soviet Union, the crime rate has increased in 1,5 times. In other words, if capital penalty passed, it won’t change the situation about crime in our country for the better.
Even though the economy of maintenance taxes would be great, I think saving human lives is more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...and, citizens are not content that they takes are allocated to assist criminals who a...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$450'.
Suggestion: $450
...arch Institute wrote in an article that 450$ spent on one jailed on mostly content. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11155378486 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50893547667 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4244036119 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145293284232 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493501223031 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399358430471 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501207355231 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421601143242 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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