overpopulation
Overpopulation of the world has been an alarming of humans because of lack of resources. Both governments and individuals should have responsibility to find ways to overcome these problems. This essay will discuss this issue using examples to support arguments and demonstrate points.
Overpopulation is the main motivator of lots of problems in the world. Firstly, it makes sense that if one family has more children than their planned, the parents will not have a stable income to bring them up. This problem can lead to many poor quality housing and plum in every city. Besides that, overpopulation can formulate a generation lacking knowledge because the educational standard has led to the development of the country. Secondly, there will be an increased rate of unemployment. Jobs available in their countries are less than the number of people.
There are some solutions to solve this problem. For example:many governments in the world have encouraged that each family should just have 1-2 children. In addition, all schools should have campaigns which supply fundamental knowledge about the importance of birth control. Each person will have awareness about this problem. Moreover, humanity should have more activities which ameliorate the environment. We should find other resources which are friendly to the environment. We can plant more trees to save our environment, and use friendly bags instead of plastic bags.
In conclusion, it is my point of view that overpopulation can lead to many problems which need to be solved by both governments and individuals. If we strive to protect the environment, future of people will be better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35114503817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0102964149 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4981278519 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138199297734 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051192328835 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984356988979 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106628034715 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634136127221 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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