Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement mentions that students' academic performance should be the main factor for teachers' salaries. I mostly agree with this prompt. Here are some examples to prove my ideas.
First of all, it is very important for students to have a good understanding instructor because it can help students to learn better. When a professor does not explain the concepts very well, students are going to struggle with that course for the whole semester. That is definitely not fair for educators at all. Imagine a chemistry college professor who does not show good attitude when students show up for her office hours to ask her questions. In this case, students are either not able to pass the class or get good grades. Thus, it is a good idea to predict teachers' salaries based on educators' evaluation.
In addition, communication between students and teachers is very important to improve academic learning and teaching. Unfortunately, sometimes teachers may be tired of repeating the same teaching courses over and over. Thus, students will not feel welcomed to their classes. This will result in poor academic performance for some students. Thus, considering educators' grades is a good way to make sure that there is good connection between professors and their students.
On the contrary, some people may believe that instructors' income should not be based on students grades which can be true sometimes. Consider a instructor who only care about money, so he/she will make a class so easy to pass without any good understanding of the course for students. As a result, educators will not learn the concept completely. It is necessary to make sure all students try their best to learn the course especially if the concept is already challenging to learn.
It is a good idea to pay attention to educators succeed to calculate teachers' salary; however, students' grade should not affect the whole amount of instructors' income. The reason is teachers need to make their classes a little challenging to make sure that students learn the course perfectly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...r because it can help students to learn better. When a professor does not explain the ...
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Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'educators'' or 'educator's'?
Suggestion: educators'; educator's
...a to predict teachers salaries based on educators evaluation. In addition, communicati...
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Line 2, column 615, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...salaries based on educators evaluation. In addition, communication between stude...
^^^
Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'instructors'' or 'instructor's'?
Suggestion: instructors'; instructor's
... contrary, some people may believe that instructors income should not be based on students ...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s which can be true sometimes. Consider a instructor who only care about money, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07100591716 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75382606544 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0404918002 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192550571276 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660375197174 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590213321327 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129363658745 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463193824318 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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