Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that people residing in foreign countries have lots of difficulties in both their social and practical life. However, I don’t agree with this opinion that thanks to the development of education and technology, individuals can easily get used to the living conditions in other nations.
To start with, social problems are not as serious as we all have thought. Foreigners always welcome people from other countries to come and live with them so that they can broaden their horizons about differences in cultures and lifestyles. Moreover, they are usually hospitable and cordial so it seems quite easy to have a talk and make friends with them. For example, when you come to Vietnam, people here are very enthusiastic, they are willing to answer any questions from you or even help you take a tour and understand more about their beautiful country. Additionally, unlike the past, humans nowadays have higher education and more experience, so that they have more awareness of language barriers, thus really appreciating foreigners’ effort to get acquainted with the life in their country. Particularly, some adversities for exchange students while studying in other countries were racism, misconception, and discrimination, so they felt antipathy towards surrounding people and just wanted to segregate themselves from the community. But now, those problems have gradually disappeared and been replaced by harmony with their foreign friends.
Besides, difficulties in practical activities have not been too severe to be nervous. Thanks to the development of technology, residents in foreign countries can do everything by themselves without too much help from others. For example, with technical devices, when they want to find the correct directions, all they need to do is to search the location on Google map and receive instructions in their language just in seconds. Furthermore, there are thousands of useful apps to learn languages, so they can try and improve their understanding and speaking skills of the common language of the countries they are living in. They have available environments to practice and enhance their abilities, so with some effort and their phones accompanying them, they can gradually adapt to other countries' cultures and people’s attitudes there. Thanks to that, they have opportunities to enhance their capacities day by day to become the most satisfied and best version of themselves.
In conclusion, from my perspective, I think that living in a foreign country and having to speak its national language is not as severe as we used to think thanks to the help of state-of-the-art education and modern technology.
- Nowadays children watch too much TV Why is this happening and what can be done to prevent it 73
- Today TV channels show more men s sports than women s sports Why is this the case Should TV channels give equal time for women s sport and men s sport 84
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- In the future nobody will buy newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Nowadays children watch too much TV Why is this happening and what can be done to prevent it 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ul apps to learn languages, so they can try and improve their understanding and speakin...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3451536643 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01201330978 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522458628842 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2599755914 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.3125 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243805004531 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905764196372 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048749496383 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15612068455 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223701263309 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.