Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people's lives?
do you agree or disagree?
it is often argued that the fashion industry harms citizen's life. I completely disagree with this opinion and think fashion has a sizable part in our mind healthy.
First of all, I believe that fashion gives people a sense of fulfilment that nothing can guarantee. For most people nowadays. they work because of their personal requirements such as travel, education and the prime reason is fashion. There is a fact that you can buy a clothe with a tiny budget but when you wear a high-end dress it would be much satisfaction and fulfilling life. For instance, have you ever wondered why celebrities wear clothes from the most ubiquitous fashion brand in the world? It is because they want to show off their money and appearance.
Secondly, fashion can be a part of people's culture. In other words, they can show up what they stand for and even aid in honouring their faith and values that symbolize people's way of life. For example, Vietnam has a variety of cultures, and each of them has a uniform so that people can identify who they are, what they stand for, and the value of the ethnicity.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the fashion industry has many benefits on citizen's life.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...e fashion industry has many benefits on citizens life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74162679426 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50086864788 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6129255561 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5833333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205847748706 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861090437811 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476247410322 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122456486316 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208974601575 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.