The readind passage and lecture are both about whether dinosaurs wa s endothermal reptiles or not. The writers claims three evidences that dinosaurs were enotherms. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, all evidence which are mentioned in pasage are incorrect.
First, the lecturer states, dinosaurs lived in polar regions. Such cold area only endothermal animals can withstant its cold whether. This statement is challenged by professor. She says, in the past climate was warmer than recent days. In addition, dinasaurs migrate to warmer area or hybrid during cold period.
Second, the author asserts, there is a relation between legs position and endotherms animals. Legs of endotherms animal underneath the body and dinosaurs also had the same position of legs like endotherms. The professor refutes this notion. She states, this feature for position of dinosaurs legs does not necessarily mean that dinosaurs used their legs for running or any other physiological activities like other endotherms animals. Instead position of legs help dinosaurs to carry and support their heavy weight.
Finally, the author elaborates on haversian canals that found in dinosaurs bone which is an important feature of endotherms animals. The lecturer contradicts this point. She says, there are growing rings in dinosaurs bones, these rings indecate that there are period of slow growing in bone in the cold climat. But the bone of endotherms animals undergo rapid groth even in cold wheather.
The readind passage and lecture are both about whether dinosaurs wa s endothermal reptiles or not. The writers claims three evidences that dinosaurs were enotherms. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, all evidence which are mentioned in pasage are incorrect.
First, the lecturer states, dinosaurs lived in polar regions. Such cold area only endothermal animals can withstant its cold whether. This statement is challenged by professor. She says, in the past climate was warmer than recent days. In addition, dinasaurs migrate to warmer area or hybrid during cold period.
Second, the author asserts, there is a relation between legs position and endotherms animals. Legs of endotherms animal underneath the body and dinosaurs also had the same position of legs like endo therms. The professor refutes this notion. She states, this feature for position of dinosaurs legs does not necessarily mean that dinosaurs used their legs for running or any other physiological activities like other endotherms animals. Instead position of legs help dinosaurs to carry and support their heavy weight.
Finally, the author elaborates on haversian canals that found in dinosaurs bone which is an important feature of endotherms animals. The lecturer contradicts this point. She says, there are growing rings in dinosaurs bones, these rings indecate that there are period of slow growing in bone in the cold climats. But the bone of endotherms animals undergo rapid groth even in cold wheather.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38396624473 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58730654136 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6693120811 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8888888889 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 21.698381199 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06452816374 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380718047656 0.272083759551 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121141323208 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138565925579 0.0662205650399 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276248375498 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.299568597762 0.0443174109184 676% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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