Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The above prompt suggests that the people who are inexorable and relentless with a pellucid idea, are the people who leave a mark or legacy in the history. I absolutely agree with this statement. In a world like ours, without having a strong idea, and the intrepidity to achieve it, nothing can be accomplished. "Tough times don't last, but tough people do". It is only possible for a person to be successful if they put their foot down and make a point. You need to be firm and confident enough with your idea, regardless of the criticism and doubts, others cast on you. It is going to be very difficult to fight through all these predicaments, but in the end it will all be worth it. The key is to believe in yourself even if nobody else will.
To begin with, It is all in the mindset and will power of a person to fight through all the quagmires, criticism and doubts, and to make the idea a success. For example, Thomas Edison, when he first brought out the concept of bulbs nobody would have believed him, as it seemed impossible at the time. He would have been castigated for presenting such an idea, which would have seemed ludicrous at the time. But if he did not give up, he believed in the idea when no one else did. And today because of him we have electricity and bulbs which is one of the most essential elements for survival. According to the New York Law, for a place to be habitable, it needs to have electricity and running water. And the breach or violation of this law could lead to imprisonment of the owner.
Aditionally, it is upto the person if they want to succeed, if they want to leave a legacy it is going to take a lot of hardwork and opposition from people. Until the new discovery is made it is going to seem impossible. For example, the company Amazon, Jeff Benzos the CEO of amazon, definetely would have faced a lot of vituperation when he first thought of the concept of online shopping. But today, Amazon is one of the most used apps for any kind of online shopping. The idea is simple, the execution is what is difficult, but if executed flawlessly, it can take you to the great heights.
Lastly, everyone thinks that ideas need to byzantine and intricate which is not the case. It needs to be simple and unique from the others in the market which will add value . For example, Swiggy the food delivering app, they started simple, they just delievred food from nearby restaurants within a short time, which was the unique selling point of their start-up. And today it is the most used app for ordering food.
In conclusion, everyone is going to mock or criticize you for your ideas no matter what. Success is completely arbitary in this world, and with self confidence and will power anyone can achieve anything, if they put their mind to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... can be accomplished. 'Tough times dont last, but tough people do'. It is ...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of hardwork and opposition from people. Until the new discovery is made it is going t...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...thers in the market which will add value . For example, Swiggy the food delivering...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49409448819 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5029562074 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484251968504 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.77640449438 619% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9732877721 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8076923077 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197380705444 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054163132208 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600734951537 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108983290326 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536708039797 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.