Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home.why do you think it is happen? what are the advantages and disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, people in this modern era are too advanced that they prefer to eat from food from restaurants instead of cooking at home. According to my diagnosis, there are several reasons behind this phenomenon. however, it has both pros and cons.
To commence with, this phenomena of eating food from outside rather than home is caused by two main reasons. Firstly, people have no time to cook food at home due to their hectic schedules. To be more precise, more number of masses in this modern world prefer to earn more and more money because they think that they can buy everything with money. To earning more capital they do extra work that's why they do not invest their precious time in cooking food because they know that they can eat food without cooking by ordering from restaurants. Secondly, some human beings love to eat different varieties of food. To elaborate, as people cannot able to make all kind of haute cuisine at home due to this they have to visit restaurants to eat various foods.
On the one hand, there are many multifarious advantages of eating food outside from home. Primary, by ordering food from restaurants masses can save their time. In other words, making food at home is a time-consuming process which is not good for the workers life. However, if they eat packet food, then they can preserve their time to utilise on other crucial task. Nextly, by buying food from outside people can experience the taste of new foods which are not possible to cook at home. Thus,they can enjoy the different kinds of foods.
On the other hand, this pattern of purchasing food from outside have also some adverse effect on human beings. Predominant one is that it it is harmful to their health. In explanation, most of the packaged foods are too oily and contain excess amount of fat inside them which is not beneficial for humans because it cause serious diseases like obesity. Therefore, people are more unhealthy by eating junk food despite of homemade food. What is more, it increase the expenditure of people. To illustrate, we all know that packed food are too expensive as compared to the food which is made at home because only little amount of money is required to make food at home. Hence,
expensive of human beings are increased.
To sum up, although hectic schedule and peoples nature of eating different foods are the main reason, but I think it has both merits and demerits for human beings.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77725118483 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39780452579 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488151658768 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1469666726 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.652173913 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30434782609 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235987328124 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754400574859 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678498798992 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117656204782 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618054503065 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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