Some people say that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it.
Do you agree or disagree. ?
It is an undeniable fact that pollution is increasing day by day in the world. Many individuals say that people should find way to live with climate change instead of finding the ways to prevent it. I disagree with the given statement that we should search ways such as using electric vehicles and eco friendly residence to prevent the pollution in the environment.
On the one hand, some citizens opine that we should stop preventing climate changes, because they believe that it is not possible to prevent the pollution. They believe that people cannot easily prevent the changes in environment like to stop the ice melting in the Antarctica. No one can reduce the pollution which is happen in the air by industries and vehicles. In result people say that we should make habits to live with these changes.
On the other hand, I believe that we should try to stop the changes in the environment. People can start using electric vehicles to reduce the pollution in the air instead of regular vehicles. The government should make some rules against emission from industries and old vehicles to reduce the air pollution. For instance, recently, India’s prime minister made a rule to scrap the vehicles which is older than 20 years. The government should start some campaigns which spread awareness of climate change and teach the citizens to how to reduce pollution. By doing these type of activities government can stop the climate change.
In conclusion, I believe that one person cannot stop the climate change but the government can take some steps to reduce the changes in the environment and people does not have to find ways to live with the changes in global environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...o one can reduce the pollution which is happen in the air by industries and vehicles. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59228203155 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435087719298 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9171603564 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449190182359 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156325842591 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146861098785 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298255509881 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964985456132 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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