In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
t is true that with the changes in contemporary society, many adults have been choosing to perpetuate living on the same roof with their parents for several reasons. Although, the drawback is not without, the upside can justify this.
There are several reasons why this trend has gained popularity during this period of time. First, the economy would be considered as the primary factor for this paradigm shift in the modern lifestyle, with the increase of inflation, commodities and renting costs have been becoming outrageously expensive compared to past generations. Therefore, living together could be the solution for this problem as young adults could take advantage of their parents' house economically instead of paying a huge amount of money for rent. Second, the job market right now entails the pressure on time and effort, resulting in unexpected repercussions like depression, stress or even suicidal. Consequently, parents would bring the spiritual foundation and consolidate the psychology for young adults to overcome the life and work tensions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46060606061 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79859600114 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70303030303 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6517733155 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183060491656 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742799805436 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663334815463 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1530252738 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108724094294 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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