Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The importance of work during studies which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years.In my opinion, day job by youth which induces some essence of value of money and discipline like feature appears to be more rational.This essay will further elaborate both views and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that working while doing studies can give rise to self dependency in students.Because of this, the teen will come to know about the value of money and discipline which leads them to become morally strong in the society.Moreover, an essence of punctuality as well as team spirit will develop in the teenager.Needless to say, all these merits of in a job stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that post working hours, the teen will exhausted mentally and physically which leads to less concentration towards study.Instead of giving their all to the education, they will feel less inclination to teachings that is really worrisome for their future aspects. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a certain conclusion that benefits of part-time work and earning from it are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, moreover, really, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01219512195 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95079114005 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.27872303 49.4020404114 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 274.0 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6666666667 20.7667163134 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164458138207 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962636104177 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478306166549 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129921447549 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127533208808 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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