The graph shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph indicates the proportion of Australian people exports to four separate nations, namely Japan, America, China and India over a 22-year period starting from 1990.
Overall, it is evident that the share of the US and India showed a fluatation. Meanwhile, the figures for Japan declined significantly, an opposite pattern was true for China witnessing a gradual surge.
Looking at the graph in more details, one can see that during the time shown, America and India varied approximately 5-6 percentage. With the figures being nearly 11 percentage, however, the share of the US ended almost 12-13 percentage and was equal to India which saw an upward trend.
Capturing 2-3 percentage in 1990, but later China climbed quickly,making up nearly 28 percentage. After reaching the highest point of 26 percentage, being the dominant at the top spot of the total in 1990, Japan experienced a considerable shrink and just accounted for a two-thirds of China by the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11612903226 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75605472897 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670967741935 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1603239829 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156135686955 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717092327823 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581736548511 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889290679253 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517529010271 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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