The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram visualized the process of extracting oil from avocado by mechanical function.
Overall, avocado harvest from the garden then after few process of machine and human touch unwanted squanders goes orchard bush and from others, oil is produced.
Firstly, avocado fruits come in human touch they sort out rotten fruits and remove those after that they pass good fruits in the washer after finish the washing procedure fruits pass in crushers and blenders. then the semi-liquid object goes in a process where separation of liquid and solid happens with the help of centrifugal force. After removing solid waste again through centrifugal force separation of unwanted water and oil happened. After that through the filter process oil is clarified.
During the extraction of oil, In the whole process, there are separation of unwanted matters. In very first, during the selection process, rotten fruits are collected then during the blending process seeds skin are collected, then during the centrifugal process solid squanders are collected. These squanders are dumped in a dump truck for dumping in orchard bush.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun process seems to be countable; consider using: 'few processes'.
Suggestion: few processes
...cado harvest from the garden then after few process of machine and human touch unwanted squ...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...e fruits pass in crushers and blenders. then the semi-liquid object goes in a proces...
^^^^
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion of unwanted water and oil happened. After that through the filter process oil is ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40340909091 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47398003651 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6514912003 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797439253695 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466565027852 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463499050978 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718375691345 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525856651735 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.