The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram depicting the procedure of extracting oil from avocado in the factory. This illustrates the complete procedure and techniques involved during the process through workers and machines.
Initially the avocado is provided to number of workers on a conveyer belt through which the workers separates rotten fruits so that only fresh avocados goes for further processing. Separated fruits gets into the washer for cleaning. After that fruits are put into a big crusher for blending. Through the crusher, seeds and skin of the fruits gets separated and a truck is sent to farms for future saplings.
After fruits crushing process, the blended fruits are put into another machine with maximum of 45-50 centigrade temperature that separates solids and liquids which is called stage 1 centrifuge. Solid waste is sent to orchids through a waste truck as well. At stage 2 centrifuge, machine further separates the oil and water. Waste water is thrown in parallel and extracted oil is sent to filtration plant where oil is clarified and fill in the final dispenser for commercial consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'centrifuge' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centrifuges'.
Suggestion: centrifuges
...rough a waste truck as well. At stage 2 centrifuge, machine further separates the oil and ...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l dispenser for commercial consumption.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22598870056 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65264916784 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4107131471 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0635782196484 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310412542783 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426561937717 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489670605926 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234340793399 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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