Many people believe that today there is general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others.what mighy have caused this situation?How to improve it ?
A generation ago social issue and respect, venerates for others was predominantly existing .Most of the people tried to abide by these norms .However,
nowdays there is an upward trend of anti-social behaviour and decrease of respect for other people in the society . In this essay I will discuss core of the reasons for this and propose some solid solutions.
One of the main causes of the problem is that much of emphesise put in academic education rather than social education.By this I mean childrens are growing up without sufficient education about norms ,value ,respect to others etc .Subsequently we can appear negative scenario of our society in the question of social behaviour and respect for others .for example in Bangladesh most of the educational institutions try to evasion social and humanities studies and much fussy about theoritical lessons .Aftermath we can see soaring increasing rate of juvenile crime and possity of social norms in this country . The solution for the problem is that include social humanitarian studies in academic curriculam and make it as a mandatory.
Another reason is that family .Some people think that it is not important to teach their children about social behaviour and how to respect of others.That is to say because of unconsciousness of family childrens and other junior member think that it is not their duty.For instance, in Mumbai most of the senior members of family occupy in their jobs.Childrens growing up without family education about social norms. Eventually hey are not be fussy about these kind of things in their later mature life. To tackle this issue senior members of the society have to make consolidation about teaching social behaviour and respect.
A third cause of the problem is that technology issue. Due to the various technology people are allways busy with smartphones, laptops and modern devices .They have lack of time to introduce, make recapitulation, gosiping and know about other members in the society
To sum up the problem and recede back social behavior and respect is impossible due to reasons such as much importance in theoretical education, family background problem and consumption majority of time in technological devices. It is a serious unless including social studies in study, take responsibility about these problems by senior family members. instead of using exorbitant time in internet and smartphone .In my opinion the main responsibility for solving this problem lies with society and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, for example, for instance, i mean, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25935162095 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88560536922 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503740648379 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.772721362 49.4020404114 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.727272727 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4545454545 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272344468247 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104446132035 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744595589719 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154726326783 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061510271782 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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