a Nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
Education provides not only knowledge , but a correct education will also shape...
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Suggestion: The
...how to live life throughout ones career.The prompt recommends students to study the...
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Suggestion: .
...urriculum untill they enter into college . In my opinion i strongly agree with the...
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...es their secondary schooling. Toi begin , A well settled nation will always takes...
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Suggestion: take
...gin , A well settled nation will always takes the quality of decisions considering a...
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Suggestion:
... nation will always takes the quality of decisions considering all the situations...
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...decisions considering all the situations , conditions of the nations and also if a...
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...tandard to be competitive to the world. for instance , if a nation do not have any ...
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...e competitive to the world. for instance , if a nation do not have any limitations...
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... if a nation do not have any limitations . any private organisation can have their...
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... a nation do not have any limitations . any private organisation can have their own...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ow their own teaching style which might effect the career of the students and sometime...
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...career of the students and sometimes the educational institutions in remote areas...
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... remote areas and are not matured enough to decide what to teach which might also...
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... a problem for the children so it is not a big challenging factor for government ...
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Suggestion: ,
...the ones secondary highschool. Secondly , it will also indirectly helps the stude...
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Suggestion: ,
... a proper job after their future studies , considering the nation china , japan wh...
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Suggestion: ,
...e studies , considering the nation china , japan which are most popular for electr...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
... implement all the robotic equipment so its their nations responsibility to at leas...
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Suggestion: ,
...ulum before entering into their colleges , by doing this it might create some inte...
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...e specialisation in their higher studies . similarly considering china which is on...
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...pecialisation in their higher studies . similarly considering china which is one of the t...
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Suggestion: similarly,
...pecialisation in their higher studies . similarly considering china which is one of the t...
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...ecom and mobile manufacturing industries . secondly , A nation should not leave...
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...nd mobile manufacturing industries . secondly , A nation should not leave their young...
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Suggestion: ,
...e manufacturing industries . secondly , A nation should not leave their young g...
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...thout know about their countries HIstory , culture , political system , geographic...
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... about their countries HIstory , culture , political system , geographical knowled...
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...ies HIstory , culture , political system , geographical knowledge of their country...
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... geographical knowledge of their country , in these days young generation is mostl...
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Suggestion: ,
...ents in that direction. In conclusion , it is always a nation responsibility to...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...also it will be helpful in rescuing the nations culture and diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17197452229 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92164132916 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452229299363 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.888423457 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.666666667 118.986275619 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.3333333333 23.4991977007 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 5.21951772744 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325554529302 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155233625855 0.0831039109588 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751119883289 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201712894133 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506948988183 0.0667264976115 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 14.1392134831 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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