All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The recent change proppsed by the government to change the education system of our country, where the current schools should design their learning stucture to a more practical based approach, it makes imperative for the parens to volunteer time to their children's schools. I would mostly agree with the prompt's recommendation, as it will only help the parents of the to have insights on growth their children.
Since in today's fast growing world, parents have been left with no option but to focus on their work so that they could provide best for their children. This attitude of the parents have led them to neglect and keep check on their child's growth, and education here being the most important factor. Parents first used to sit together with their children to teach them, help them finish their homeworks, assignments and also build science proejcts or draw with them for fun or used to go watch their children play sports. But now busy in this progress oriented world, most parents send their children to tuitions which makes them unaware of their children's education and school life. So possible solution for this maybe that parents should take the time out of their busy schedule and volunteer their time at their children's school, as this will help them not overlook on their children's growth.
The idea of volunteering at school comes with lots of benefits fo the parents, school and the children. Parents could keep time to time check on the quality of education being provided by the school, the current grades and performance of their children in various subjects, help note changes that maybe be required in the school, or some difficulties being faced by their children and come up with possible best solutions for them. It will also help the parents and children to grow much better bond in limited time.
It might be difficult for some the middle class parents where their work becomes a more priority, which makes it impossible for any of the two parents or the guradians to take out time for volunteering once in week or a month, as the consequnce maybe that it could lead to a pay or salary cut, and the main focus to provide for their children gets affected alot. If such is the case then parents should find out other possible ways to keep a check on their children's lives after their work or through some other ways.
In sum, in today's modern world where the purpose of everyone is to be better than other have led us to forget to look out for our family and friends, in the process of doing this hardowork eventually for them only. Hence, the choice that parent should volunteer their time in their children's school becomes a necessary option for the parents. As, it only offers the best possible solution for the parents to make for the time they cannot take out to give enough attention on the growth of their kids. Yes, for some parents it might not be the plausible solution but it still seems to be a better option than most other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prompts'' or 'prompt's'?
Suggestion: prompts'; prompt's
... schools. I would mostly agree with the prompts recommendation, as it will only help th...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ld lead to a pay or salary cut, and the main focus to provide for their children gets affe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70576923077 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31015813773 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432692307692 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.700284183 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.9375 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28965199193 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129316737329 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533710544279 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199202738412 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221796690514 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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