Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is true that people hold conflicting views about developing good eating habits in children. While a number of people believe that it is better for children when learning it at an educational establishment, I would argue that this duty should be assured by parents.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that schools play a key role in promoting a healthy lifestyle and balanced diet for children in some ways. First, since teachers can teach them about healthy style make them understand so that they can embrace healthy eating habits in their day-to-day. Second, teachers also can give them fundamental knowledge about the importance of fruit and vegetable and make them realize how healthy children can be by consuming them. For example, they can arrange one day to visit the farms in order to teach children how vital nutrients in fruits keep them healthy.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why parents have great responsibilities in their offspring’s diet and health. To begin with, since children spend most of their time at home, parents can control their bad eating habits. This means that children these days are more prone to eating unhealthy food such as burgers, chocolates, and cakes. Such habits can be controlled by parents before kids become addicted to junk food. Furthermore, by creating and following a diet plan and strictly adhere to it, their child receives optimum nutrition essential for building up his or her immune system. For instance, children should be given fresh fruits as their snacks at home rather than cookies and chocolates.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to adopt a healthy lifestyle for kids at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98961937716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6363058161 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6978626907 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292784908903 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975280740518 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575630580301 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171215501878 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356116441064 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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