1.You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
Give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hi Ramya,
How've you been? It's been quite a long time since I've written back. I wanted to share the good news with you that I will be soon moving to Canada as I have been enrolled for a 5 year B. Arch course at Humber University. The classes commence next month on Month the 5th.
I have made the necessary bookings and I am very excited to see you soon! The college timings are 9:00 am to 4:00 pm meaning I will have free time post classes and was thinking to opt for a part-time job. Although I am carrying my savings with me I was thinking that part-time job would help me to pay rent and food along with leisure expenses as well.
Could you help me find small work there at Brampton? I know you work with hospitality industry and was hoping you could search a small job profile for me since I have some experience in that forte.
Eagerly waiting for your reply and can't wait to meet you. I've so many things to share!
Yours friendly
Manjyot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'was', 'were'?
Suggestion: was; were
Hi Ramya, Howve you been? Its been quite a long time since Ive w...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... been? Its been quite a long time since Ive written back. I wanted to share the goo...
^^^
Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Eagerly waiting for your reply and cant wait to meet you. Ive so many things to...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...r your reply and cant wait to meet you. Ive so many things to share! Yours frien...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30769230769 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15479907155 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3009796216 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2727272727 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27454034686 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101708426255 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667806921975 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156819713409 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033058843275 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.