Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Professionals have a high position in our society due to their talent and ability to make communities better. One of them is the specialized athlete which can recieve more payment than other experts. Certain individuals think this is underserved while others think this is acceptable. The following paragrahs will discuss in both views
On one hand, I understand why it can be argued that it is unjust for sport players to have a higher salary than others professionals. Although sports have been developed dramatically through the past years, it hasn’t played an important role in our civilization compared to a number of experts such as doctors,teachers,etc. To prove this, we have a pharmacist who creates medicine to save people life, a teacher that brings a plethora of knowledge to a person or a police that keep us harmless. Certain nations may demand on sport and spend too much money on it although their finance is not stable. For instance, Oman is a country that has spent billions to build a huge stadium despite their evolving poverty- stricken. Therefore, it seems to only be right that people should have a good wage due to their contribution to their community.
On the other hand, I believe professional sports athletes deserve to have a good payment. Due to the fact that their salary related to their achievement and performance; sports contestants have to train hard that make they have to exert a lot. In addition, during a competition, there is still existed certain risk of accident which can bring pain and trauma to the players. This can also lead to mental illness or worse is the death. On the contrary, if a specialized athlete can achieve any medal or prize in a contest such as the Olympic, how honor they can make for their country. Their triumph will inspire many individuals of all ages. Another reason is that scientists or engineers can have a stable job until the age of 60 while sports competitors, their performance can only be the best in certain years.
In conclusion, there are still some arguments for the unfairness in the specialized athlete’s payment but I believe their higher salary is worthy based on what they do for their society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89784946237 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87428325329 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2774104592 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216641842803 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725387474466 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702433183769 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137186431347 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083218855789 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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