Write a narrative essay about (1) someone or something that influenced you
However hard I have tried ,my life hasn't ever had any prominent milestones during 19 previous years. I’m conscious of my life being monotonous owing to keeping myself in a comfort zone. Whenever I come across those who have had a huge standing achievement in their lives, I always admire their bravery and confidence. Nevertheless, there is no objective to visualize a plan for my future. Not until I watched a video of Khanh Vy who is not only a blogger about beauty, lifestyle but only a professional language. It wasn’t long after following all her products when I was considerably confident of my capability and my future gradually appeared clearly. Therefore, it is Khanh Vy who has triggered inspiration within me.
The first video in which Khanh Vy showed that she is skillful at using seven languages proficiently. From her interesting video, several positive characteristics such as self-motivation, sense of humour, and talent were the first things that came to my attention. I’m only 3 years younger than her. Consequently, I thought that I must follow this special girl by watching all her videos and learning plenty of helpful experiences which were shared by her .
The majority of her youtube channels are associated with learning english. She is an english expert, which she is invited to serve as MC for VTV and learning english programs. In every uploaded video, she will share tips, English books, ways to train pronunciation and improve their english. Especially, she always brings a positive energy to those who are disorienting in this life and provides more motivation for individuals who are fed up with learning english. in addition, she creates some videos about healthy lifestyles so that anyone haven’t known how to maintain their health and a number of knowledges around the world.
In conclusion, I feel blessed to have the opportunity to know the adorable girl as Khanh Vy. Thanks to her videos, My english knowledge is improving day by day and I’m more and more confident to pursue my dream in future. Each video is a distinguished valuable lesson and conveys lots of worthwhile messages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...has triggered inspiration within me. The first video in which Khanh Vy showed...
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...ber of knowledges around the world. In conclusion, I feel blessed to have th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05949008499 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92946978594 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606232294618 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.501594057 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0150741301693 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00493117405642 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01397321066 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0080163639244 0.151304729494 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00803000373155 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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