Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to make families closer?
In our contemporary world, individuals are keeping themselves away from their families. There appear to be two main causes of this, and several possible solutions, as we will explain here.
Perhaps the main cause is the lack of time. In other words, due to busy lifestyle of individuals they do not have an opportunity to talk to their family members, as a result, it leads to misunderstanding and avoiding each other. For example, "Journal of Family Issues" reported that many couples cite communication problems as leading motives for divorce. Moreover, egoism is another reason that can cause family crisis. By the way of explanation, in social media ideal figures or unrealistic standards of beauty conveys fake life and dictates us what king of life, figure, lifestyle we need to be happy, therefore, people are more self-centered, today. For instance, it was proven at the documentary «Social dilemma» that every seven photo at social platforms like Facebook and Instagram influence our mental health and relationships.
Turning to possible solutions, it is not secret that being genuinely interested in other people's live help to restore relationships. Hence, tangible and visual conversion can serve as an unbreakable bridge between relatives. To exemplify, psychologists told about the importance of establishing good lines of communication to build strong relationship. Beside, spending time with loved ones helps to maintain long-lasting, strong relationship. To clarify, when people see that someone care about them they stay closer to that person, in addition, the time spent with loved ones helps to take one`s mind off the problems and fuss, also helps to relax and work with greater efficiency in the future, it is well known fact that rest contribute to greater concentration and effectiveness.
In conclusion, spending too much time on work and using the internet can be alien for relatives, nonetheless, the problem can be curbed by using up the time together with family.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sing up the time together with family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, by the way, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37974683544 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09128463565 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7763896243 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208115371041 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061003520206 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057444188751 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118672658705 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504257899717 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.