In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is noticeable that a growing number of dressing in western-influenced clothing instead of their traditional clothes. Personally, I think it closely related to cultural and commercial globalization and bring about broadly negative effect to traditional clothing.
The main cause of this phenomenon is the convenience of technology and transportation which accelerate globalization and allow corporations more easily affect people wearing. The individual usually inclines to accept mainstream clothing culture because it is much comfortable as well as more suitable for different occasions. For instance, people would wear t-shirts and jeans rather than traditional riko or fodoy in daily life. Furthermore, as their corporation usually has affordable prices which will attract more people to buy. For example, companies like Zara and H&M always produce abundant identical items of clothing at much cheaper prices.
There is no doubt that this influence enables people to get lower prices, however, there are also some negative impacts on this cultural diversity. First, national consciousness will be weakened under this tremendous trend. Thus, it will lead the country to lose the traditional techniques such as textile and dyeing clothing. Second, local industries will be suppressed even forcing them into bankruptcy because those western enterprises have competitiveness on price. Accordingly, these industries symbolize our culture and identity so it is necessary to preserve them.
In conclusion, western fashion trends are ubiquitous today which represents traditional clothing is in negative development. In my opinion, it is important to strike a balance between following new culture and protect traditional culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91699604743 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17235969254 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671936758893 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3038675756 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265397557224 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079821840305 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605149895993 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140944044825 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165216400819 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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