Do you agree or disagree students are influenced by teacher than friends

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...dly true that students are influenced by different personalities.Although some be...
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...t impacted as a result of their friends.More importantly, I posit that students are...
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...r friends.More importantly, I posit that students are always affected by their c...
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...posit that students are always affected by their close associates.I feel this wa...
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...rsonal experience is an example of this.When I was in my twelfth grade I never dream...
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...end of mine that had already applied for S.A.T in order to study pharmacy in one ...
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...d states.Initially, I was obtuse because I never knew anything about pharmacy pr...
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...ally, I was obtuse because I never knew anything about pharmacy profession, but ...
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...ng about pharmacy profession, but when I saw her some years i was moved to study...
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...fession, but when I saw her some years i was moved to study the same pharmacy.B...
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...ession, but when I saw her some years i was moved to study the same pharmacy.Bes...
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...vely because she did not only make paved way for me but also makes me a bulwark ...
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...t close associates impact students life.This is because they spend a plethora of tim...
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...lethora of time together, and because of similarities with age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, i feel, as a result, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0113313241 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 126.0 20.1344086022 626% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 623.274328758 48.9658058833 1273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 620.0 100.406767564 617% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 126.666666667 20.6045352989 615% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 47.6666666667 5.45110844103 874% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.5376344086 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0847553812573 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07098491895 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401578170304 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062927117684 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040107414927 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 64.9 11.7677419355 552% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -47.95 58.1214874552 -82% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 51.3 10.1575268817 505% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.09 8.01818996416 163% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.4 10.0537634409 521% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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