Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the trend has been changed towards countries developments. However, most of countries governing body care about their financial targets. While, a section of the society thought that other problems are on priority list such as environment and pollution. In the course of the essay I will describe the arguments of both sides.
On the one hand, governments take steps to secure financial level that creates impact on other things. If a country have more economic power than they produce jobs to their natives. In addition, payment of the jobs depend on country's economics. Due to these facts governments makes way to install new factories that can produce products which export to other countries because of these exports' income which help to government to give batter facilities to their nationals. For example, China and America are rich countries and able to give their better schooling to children and make new health facilities for unhealthy people. However, other contribution also necessary.
On the other hand, to make their country economically with factories, also need to take care about environment and pollution issues which have same level importance. Nowadays, diseases are normal to everyone because pollution and climate change create significant effect on over lives. Waste of factories major cause of main diseases. For Instance, underground water resources are badly effect from black water. When people are drink water they do not know about what kind of virus in that water.
In conclusion governments think about countries economy, while they also put under light other issues. I believe both are important to each country, however, we need take steps worldwide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...owards countries developments. However, most of countries governing body care about their financi...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...el that creates impact on other things. If a country have more economic power than...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exports'' or 'export's'?
Suggestion: exports'; export's
...ort to other countries because of these exports income which help to government to give...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rces are badly effect from black water. When people are drink water they do not know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62146881832 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0840813865 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221829890611 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060347992885 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433934021927 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129106978369 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467997189118 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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