Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft.
What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people
and businesses to take?
Cybercrime, such as hacking and identity theft, has developed a negative stigma towards online platforms in people’s minds. These crimes are often more damaging than their real-life counterparts and can cause serious trouble to those in ignorance of the danger they present. However, these crimes are not impossible to avoid, as there are simple solutions that render the majority of people safe. In this essay, some of the negative effects of cybercrime will be discussed, and solutions to prevent them will be provided.
The effects of cybercrime on the victims’ lives can be catastrophic. The most harrowing of these effects, and ironically the least devastating, is the monetary damage. Hackers often use diabolical methods such as fake payment websites or scam emails to learn their victim’s bank information and drain them of money. Once a bank account is compromised, it often remains susceptible to future attacks and makes it easier for hackers to rob people of their money. However, experienced hackers often opt for far more damaging attacks. Hackers and identity thieves can cause the victim to lose authority over their own online persona. They can use the victim’s information to scam their close friends and acquaintances, send damaging posts in social media, or even incriminate the victim by using their fraudulent information to commit a crime. A third, usually disregarded effect of cybercrimes is that they cause paranoia and a sense of foreboding towards online platforms. People, especially those of older generations, may not trust their online acquaintances and be afraid of expressing their opinions online.
Fortunately, nearly all of these damages can be avoided using simple preventative measures. Firstly, people should treat online platforms with prudence. It is important to retain security by creating long complicated passwords and not sharing one’s private information with others. In addition, one should be quick to react to potential threats. If news spread that a certain online service has been compromised, people using that website should quickly change their security information in order to stop the attack from spreading far. This way, the damages will be minimal, and it might discourage hackers from trying the same forms of attacks in the future. Lastly, it is also important to avoid oversharing ever detail of one’s life over social media. This information can often be used maliciously in order to detect and abuse weaknesses in the victim’s personality and security. Overall, it is important to be cautious online to prevent damage from cybercrime.
It is often said that online attacks are bound to happen, and nothing can be done to ensure one’s safety. I do not believe that to be the case; cybercrime is only dangerous to those who are in ignorance of its vast potential and do not take the necessary precautions. If you can keep your eyes open for potential threats and treat online platforms safely and securely, there is simply nothing to worry about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...majority of people safe. In this essay, some of the negative effects of cybercrime will be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, so, third, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2550.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 483.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27950310559 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8080961417 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517598343685 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 808.2 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.953938897 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 3.9879759519 476% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155018527724 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468643808447 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459262359469 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110240714414 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505137635469 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.