The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
Given by the diagram is extracting oil from harvesting of avocado
Overall, it can be noticed that there are 12 stages which are sorted into 3 main steps. It is commencing to harvest of avocado, which then undertakes the different processes and is culminating with the purify of oil avocado.
Starting from the collection of avocados from the outer side, in which, they will be moved into the place where carry out to the following step. Inside the factory, a group of workers are responsible classification of rotten fruit and laid on a truck that is transferred to the orchard. With an adequate standardization of avocados, hand-sorting on the conveyor belt is going down the water tank where it washed. In other stages, it is involved in the crusher machine to eliminate seed and skins, whereas the rest of the composition will blend to continue another process.
It is divided into 2 stages, with the first stage being separated of solids and liquids at the maximum degree of 45-50 Celsius before generating solid waste and pouring into the truck are serve for agriculture purposes. In the two stages, the centrifuge is taking place on disport of oil and water, the remaining oil would filter, and the wastewater will be disposed of the outer side. After filtering, oil is clarifying into the container and is dispensed to the glass bottle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...erent processes and is culminating with the purify of oil avocado. Starting from the col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89519650655 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74182260508 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4440639247 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.555555556 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108414939562 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451490660058 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419632184814 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921051454595 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603658524285 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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