Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
There is no denying that the beneficial purpose of sports is an extremely hot consideration in society. While there is a school of thought that the significance of sports impacts both individuals and national development, I believe that the goal when people participate in sports is recreation.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why many people believe in the crucial role of sports when it comes to individual and national aspects. In terms of gains from sports activities, people who are involved in a kind of sport and participate in it regularly tend to be healthier and more energetic than the others who do less. They possess a healthy physical body, an optimistic attitude and widen their social cycle through attending sport-clubs or sharing with others' interests. Besides, sports are relevant with many significant national ceremonies like a reminder of historical and traditional values. For example, the Marathon competition is held annually to commemorate a historical event in European countries.
However, I suppose that the role of sports is more likely to create excitement in the community. Without any doubt, the primary goal of sports could help physical development and support people to de-stress after their daily hard schooling or work. Moreover, people without talent or love for sports are capable of choosing other types of leisure activities such as home-cooking and listening to music, which brings the same recreational benefits as sports do. By all accounts, sports activities cannot lead to any physical material and value more than the spiritual excitement of individuals and small groups. Humans can change the world thanks to the acknowledgment of science-technology instead of knowledge of sports unless they only secure a way to win a sports game.
In conclusion, sports play a crucial role in human life. Many people argue that the value of sports is considered a recreational activity, including me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27009646302 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99808494757 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2283338276 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235888636938 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825551751999 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347755958893 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145814293103 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266320739319 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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