Task 2: Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development ? What are the reasons for that ? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience?
Task 2: Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer-based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for that ? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience?
Computer’s existence has led to dramatic changes for every field in our lives including education. It is an obvious sign that nowadays, students have tendency to focus on computer based subjects more than science at school and university. This issue has opened a debate that it is positive or negative. In my opinion, the advantages of these computer based subjects outweigh their disadvantages.
First of all, it is undeniable that science subjects at school bring us a range of information about the world outside. However, students seem to benefit more things from computer based subjects than the science ones. All the information is available on the Internet so that it is not essential to spend time on learning by heart. Instead, students are required to rearrange and make use of the knowledge in the real life. As a result, the assistance of the computers is extremely indispensable because of its programs and logic.
Furthermore,living in the computer age, many companies and factories are operated by computer systems so the employers will not request high marks of science tests like physics or biology but the ability to tackle the problems on the computers from the candidates. For this reason, learning the subjects relating to the computer gives students more chances for a good career. For instance, The students graduating from an IT university will receive a higher salary than the others.Hence, even the pupils have not graduated yet, they are still able to earn the money by fixing or programming the computer and have opportunities to be an internship in some famous companies like Google or Facebook with a high pay while the students from other fields have to be the trainees without payment.
To conclude, with the advancement in technology, the computer based subjects play an important role not only in the school but also in the real life. Studying these subjects hold promise to bring the students more benefits than the science ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88330582093 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524456521739 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.5705199198 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.055555556 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54187270032 0.244688304435 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174435264111 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135520662825 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340724891344 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.276850872946 0.056905535591 487% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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