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Online learning is better than traditional classroom. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the most heated debates today is about online learning during the period. Although there are some advantages to studying via the Internet, I believe that this type of education does not outweigh traditional education, as will be seen in the following points.
The first argument is that online classes cannot completely replace in-person instruction in terms of technique and communication. Students and teachers who attend Internet-based classes may experience connectivity issues and a lack of supported devices, causing student-teacher interaction to be disrupted. Connections between tutors and students could never be as strong in online courses as they are in traditional classroom settings.

Second, not only do streaming classes lack connections, but it is also difficult to create a disciplined environment among the classes. On-campus courses teach students to follow class rules and guidelines that have been in place for years. The rules would encourage students to be more invested in their schoolwork. Another advantage of offline education is that it reduces the use of electronic devices because lessons and learning materials can be delivered directly rather than through downloaded ebooks, lowering the risk of health problems.In conclusion, while online learning may be advantageous in the short term, traditional classroom instruction is the most sustainable in the long run. However, the Internet may be a useful tool for making improvements. As a result, instructors and educationalists should take advantage of the Internet to make learning more enjoyable.<o:p></o:p>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.67193675889 5.12529762239 150% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.8626755024 2.80592935109 387% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.60771543086 137% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 175.114932743 49.4020404114 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.454545455 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104052938103 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454329940753 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486886751913 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496647735361 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465863636648 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.63 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 27.5 12.4159519038 221% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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