Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the last decades the breakthrough of technology has affected most aspects of our life. It is said that the process of computerisation is also encroaching upon the traditional ways of how work is performed. Although some kinds of employees will be replaced by digital advancements, I believe that automation will give millions of workers opportunities to have more spare time for their hobbies.
On one hand, industries that require mechanical or physical force will be automated with the usage of Artificial Intelligence. This is because such processes do not consider the power to think or analyse situations. It means that quantity of mistakes caused by human factor will significantly decrease and production process will become faster. For instance, Japan Employment Centre claims that number of employees dropped by 60% on local factory upon the introduction of robotic mechanisms there. Thus, the automation of production industry will cause millions of people their jobs.
On the other hand, this process will give people more free time. The reason for it is the speed of digital machines, which is higher than human’s. Hence the time of work for people will decrease, so they will have more opportunities for developing their other skills of enjoying time with family members. For example, The Times magazine has put out an interview with an accountant, who got an AI as his assistant: he claimed that after installation he only needs to check the final results and correct very few mistakes of the program, so he was finally able to celebrate his Birthday with his family. In other words, automation lets people to spend more time as they want instead of doing same mechanical work every day.
Even though many people will be replaced by the digital advancements, I am of an opinion that AI usage in working industry will lead employees to more opportunities and less hard physical work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...machines, which is higher than human’s. Hence the time of work for people will decrea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1054313099 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84957877853 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5571846792 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0494759401419 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244255625926 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435464024431 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.029863320069 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180642555274 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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