Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both these view and give your opinion.
Since the beginning of recorded time, zoos remain popular place for entertainment and to learn about wild animals. On the one hand many people argue that zoos can provide a sanctuary for endangered animals. However, this is refuted by others who think that animals is not comfortably living in zoos, This essay will be analyzed both these position before reaching reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, the first and foremost reason why people think that zoos can be useful for protecting wild animals because, they can help to protect endangered species. For example, human are being destroyed though cutting down the rain forest. To support it, the argument is that zoos can protect zoos can protect some of these animals that are under threat. Moreover, zoos is one of the place, where children easily learn about different animals.
On the other hand, many people argue that zoos should be shut down since zoo's animals are kept in artificial environment. For instance, zoo's animals are not easily moving in free space because at that animals are kept in cages. In addition, zoos exhibits animals with the aim of making money. Last but not least, we have no right to use animals for entertainment and profits. Thus, it is easy to see why this argument has garnered the plethora of support.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding zoos, as far as I am concerned that zoos should be closed down because of animals have not freely living in zoos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9437751004 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49690054799 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4598461166 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423578306676 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14626620548 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997760458521 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260093752217 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688017498979 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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