The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods.
To what extent do you agree?
It is human nature to mimic others in various fields especially style and in purchasing goods. This essay agrees with the statement because an inclination to adapt famous peoples modern wears and consumer products like gadgets and electronic equipment is surging rapidly.
Celebrities and models often establish different fashions and cultures in various ways through clothes, ornaments, and accessories. Many people rely on them to copy their innovative styles to cope with them or express their concern to society in attitudes and approaches. This is mainly because it would enhance the standards and cultures of a person who is an advanced and trending character. Likewise, novel gadgets and accessories would flourish their financial background and stability showcase to the others. For instance, fans and followers of celebrities, politicians and social influencers would have the propensity to dress up, buy gadgets, and other goods to imitate the same as them.
On the other hand, this trend would hurt many peoples because of spending money on unnecessary things. Most of the fashion clothes are occasional wears and expenditure would be higher than the casual clothes. Similarly, financial stabilised persons may not have problems spending an extra payment for such things but followers may have difficulty achieving. For example, common people who are buying unwanted stuff with the support of loans, EMI, and so on which may lead to extra burden to such people. Everyone needs to know the actual purpose of fashion and goods and the real needs of oneself.
To conclude, it is acceptable to imitate others in style, attitude and consumer products for new trends and viral things. Even though, understanding the needs and unnecessary things would also be in the mind of everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33098591549 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70128030656 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3383934258 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977491966302 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324876825646 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228631711732 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593108746112 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154702590359 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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