Stress caused by work is becoming a major problem worldwide. What are the reasons for this? How could this problem be tackled?
There is no doubt that residents have to face a myriad of issues in modern society, especially stress which is becoming a pressing problem around the globe. This phenomenon triggers several reasons and it needs to be addressed by the government as well as individuals.
Some reasons can explain why stress is one of the prominent issues these days. The first explanation is that due to the advanced technology and fast-paced society, physical and emotional demands are increasing day by day. This requires that inhabitants must overwork to catch up with the latest trend. For example, with the emergence of AI (Artificial Intelligence), robots gradually replace people in different aspects of society such as waiting, calculating, coordinating products, doing housework, translating…. AI outperforms human beings. Therefore, it is extremely important to try their best to refine their knowledge and computer skills. Another reason is that they feel overwhelmed by loads of work. Japanese, for instance, those who spend the whole day sitting in front of a variety of documents and tasks, leading their negative minds, even some seek for dying to escape from work pressures. As a result, too much stress may have a detrimental impact on each personal development.
To deal with this problem, both the authorities and each resident take the responsibility for that. Regarding the government, they need to take action by enacting laws about reducing time at work and more days off time during the year for dwellers to recharge their batteries after strenuous days. In addition, the authorities should set out practical programmes about balancing and modifying the emotion and psychology of staff. In terms of individuals, we are aware of suitable jobs by relocating to the new place to avoid the exotic habitats and working. Besides, each person needs to try to learn and enhance pieces of knowledge and information about all aspects and prepare stable emotion with a viewing to cope with every problem in every situation easily and wisely. On top of that, we should balance work and life, spend quality time with our beloved ones and engage in outdoor activities to reduce pressures and unwind.
In conclusion, although stress is a much concerning issue for everyone, there are some solutions to solve this situation. Hence, nobody can avoid stress from working as well as daily life and just the different way to deal with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ust the different way to deal with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17258883249 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80385065576 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606598984772 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4499422785 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.263157895 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21463298949 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601047671219 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560619310721 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14089928958 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411942418011 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.